Like a rotten log
half buried in the ground -
my life, which has
not flowered, comes
to this sad end.
half buried in the ground -
my life, which has
not flowered, comes
to this sad end.
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Minamoto Yorimasa
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I've always been fascinated by things like this and I do want to write one of my own someday.
This poem is called "death poem" and it's not my death poem but of let's say... Dying with regret kind of thing.
Truthfully I'm not sure how to explain it at the moment, it's usually like that with my poems, I always understand them after a long time.
Here it is, Death poem.
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Dreamless sleep
And sleepless dreams
How does the cluster of nightmares creep?
To hope beside my death bed
A song for the dead
And prayer for the living
How long has it been since I’ve last bled?
And sleepless dreams
How does the cluster of nightmares creep?
To hope beside my death bed
A song for the dead
And prayer for the living
How long has it been since I’ve last bled?
This wish is smeared in scarlet
Remembered to forget
Lost to be found
How far have I walked down this regret?
Only to be discovered by my demise
Empty goodbyes
Waving farewell
As I exhale my last dying sighs
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The only thing I can say is that I tried a different rhyming approach.
I could have made it rhyme more but it would be too melodic and that would make it sound a little happy when it's supposed to be sad.
I've written for years but there's still so much to learn when it comes to emotions and writing.
It's tough.
Go blog yourselves.