Monday, April 9, 2012

Equilibrium & Colors (poems)

I put both of these poems in one post because I couldn't make them as deep as I hoped.
I haven't written in awhile as well so I'll just keep it as it is, they're finished but I see them as incomplete, I might make a complimentary on them both if I can, that's what I want.
Whenever I can.

Equilibrium.
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Because the less we are
The less we want
The less we know
The less we do
Then… The less we hurt

But the more we are
The more we want
The more we know
The more we do
Then… The more we love

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Colors.
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Oblivious to the light
When comes night
We’re all but shadows

Who dares shed light in your world?

The color hasn’t faded
You forget your eyes are closed
Vision is what mystifies everything

So open your eyes

Habit prevents progress
Poison your distress
Fearing commitment because you’ve never owned

Don’t wait to get left behind


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Equilibrium the poem, is self explanatory, too much or too little of anything is bad.
As for colors the poem...
It's about changing yourself for the better and accepting things and that sometimes you just need to let go and not blindly follow or believe or do things.
Sometimes after reading the poems I've made I get to extract and understand the meaning of it and how I managed to play with some of the words and also why.
It's weird because sometimes I don't usually write them when I'm thinking.
So I never actually see these messages I've put behind them, so yeah.
I don't know.
Go blog yourselves I guess.

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