So I only changed one or two things here.
Everything will always have a thing or two missing for me, it's a little frustrating not to reached perfection or something that I don't think is missing something.
Here's the poem.
Stars.
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When time weaves away the sun
Extinguishing the daylight
Day becomes undone
Desolation comes tonight
An obstinate gloom
Siphoning the brightness
Like a monster it'll loom
Enveloping the sky with darkness
But the stellar spell will marvel
The fleeting evil will meet its doom
A promising luminosity will tranquil
Overthrowing the shadows rule
As if the night's eyes
Gracefully swimming in the celestial sea
Fragments of light kissing the skies
They're always watching me
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It's missing emotion.
Go blog yourselves.
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